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poem

#1 Postby rafikiki77 » Fri Jun 01, 2012 11:24 am

Natures kitchen

as I use up the sun beam to enrich my skin to release some melanin
The beams supply's the vitamin Ds
Let your tears water the land that provides the fruit
Recruit the organisms and minerals replenish my body to the fullest
Nothing minimal
Let's go back to the original
Where the land provided us with the residuals
Nutrition was a couple of dirt patches away
And herbs is gods gift to flush the toxins away
When the meat of the fruit was more important
And grass was the blanket to lay on to study the sky
With the sun we rise
Like a flower that blooms
Juice em and watch the DR do it's work
Provide the system with the right foods
And let the body get to work
So much misconception in how to fuel the human
I just ask mother nature to save me a plate in natures kitchen
That's the only thing I'll be consuming

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Re: poem

#2 Postby C.O. » Sat Jun 02, 2012 12:45 pm

I like it, is it an original? Do you watch Def Poetry Jam? I have always wanted to do spoken word. I have written a bunch but never done it in front of an audience. I will though. Hopefully in the near future. I think NYC and Oakland are two of the best places for it. It'd be a shame, having had lived in both cities not to have ever given it a shot.

-Dylan

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Re: poem

#3 Postby rafikiki77 » Wed Jun 06, 2012 1:05 pm

yes i wrote it myself ! def poetry jam was real good ! and if you want to recite your poems just do it

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#4 Postby C.O. » Wed Jun 06, 2012 1:08 pm

Thanks for the encouragement. I just have high standards for myself. I do stand up comedy too so getting up infront of people isnt hard for me, i just want it to be good and ready.


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